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Canon EOS 50D 1/4 second F/22.0 10 mm 100 Jun 26, 2009, 5:02:29 PM Share
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Originality: Seen lots of vertical landscape shots and many for them are similar to this style. try adding something new, example use ur widest lens or longest lens...
Technique: I feel that there is something distracting in this photo, and that think is the dark place in the lower right corner. try to avoid dark spots when u frame ur photo and always count to 10 and check ur four corners in ur camera before u click. it helps. what i also like is there is no any sign of human beings in the photo. so its just pure nature.
Impact: minimum!!! other than the vivid colors (orange mountain and blue sky) the photo has very little impact. try to find a spot where the foreground has an object or somthing that will make this pic dynamic, as u are using a wide angle lens. if u were to use a long lens, then u can illiminate a foreground impact.
Title: U CAN COME UP WITH SOMETHING BETTER MAN... i dont see the relation between the title and the image. there is no road in the photo. Titles are the introduction to you artwork. it is what attracts or repel the viewers. yes this was taken near the death road,, bas that goes in the 'location' tab not title.
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